When I published A Crucible of Souls in July 2013 it was in the best shape I could manage, and I just wanted to get it out there to see if readers would like it. Now, I know a lot of you thought A Crucible of Souls was a good read (thank you for your feedback and the reviews!), but it still had a few lingering issues and there were some legitimate criticisms voiced by readers. In the long run I wanted it to stand the test of time so I decided to put it through another couple of editing passes to improve dialogue, correct any POV issues and repetition, and sharpen the language.
There were no major changes, although I added a page to a couple of scenes, including the ending which I thought was too abrupt. The new version is only 2,000 words longer, which is 6 pages.
Hopefully I’ve turned a good book into a very good book. It’s being proofread now so the new version should be available in 4-6 weeks. And there will be maps! Kindle readers will get the updated version for free, for everyone else… er… I hope you liked the original…